I was gypsum, smooth, wet, pristine,
plaster-of-paris clean
then just when I’d been shaped perfectly
enough on which
to hang some other guy’s painting
he came and pulled
his fingers through me
dragging his strength
through my wide-spread
heart
and I, ruined, became
fine art.
His hand the focus of a most
sensual medium’s
waylaid
then-shaped
beauty
.
.

***
I just read this poem by Aashi (in my feed), thereby found the photo prompt by MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie (though sadly I can’t find it in the WP reader) and decided to give it a go. (It just so happens I’d been thinking about artful spirits and gypsumΒ last night, when titling poems, y’know. ;))
With thanks to Aashi, Mindlovemisery, and Nekneeraj’s photo prompt (#325)
for a fun impromptu exercise.
***
Edit 2020-08-05 08:20 pronouns changed from you/your to he/his.
Nicee poem! Great take! Thanks for that mention of my blogβ€
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre welcome and thanks for reading! πβ€οΈ
LikeLike
So beautiful β€β€β€ I absolutely love the rhythm of this poem!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so very much Marie! π€ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! The way you interpreted the photo prompt is truly remarkable, Lia!
I love the subtle pun- ‘plaster of paris’, don’t know if it was unintentional but it was very well crafted. ππ€ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot dear Akanksha. Means a lot to me. As far as that phrase goes, I was only exemplifying gypsum in the poem, also Paris is that not far from me; but I love the way you read, and if there are any other meanings, I will love it if you enlighten me. ππ₯°πππ¦
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh! I am always reading too much, I guess. π π€£π Along with the gypsum, I read it to be ‘you’ since it fits geographically. ππβπΉ
LikeLiked by 1 person
You guessed right my dear. Of course, it could be just metaphor. But as always, very astute you are! :)) π»π»π»
LikeLiked by 1 person
π π€πππππ
LikeLike
Fabulously powerfully evoked
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aw I’m glad you think so DA. Very kind comment thank you. π
LikeLike
You’re welcome.
And I did! ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
The poem is romantic. Love the crafting of words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, I truly appreciate your lovely comment. :))) π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poem πβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Seraja!! :))) πβ€οΈ
LikeLike