Hey, can I ask you sister
brother
Would he ‘ave thought she was to blame
Would he ‘ave thought it was her fault
Would he ‘ave taken her flower—I ask you, gentle grower—
if it had been his mother, his sister,
his daughter?
I ask you, when she suffered,
when for him—and them—it was quickly over, fun and laughter,
when the shock for her was growing colder, mudder
And the dress she’d worn
had not been for them—
the flower-body, the bird, the air, the ocean
the flow-er body of her poem
yet she’d put it out there—
yet it’s blossom had been stolen—
Did it matter?
Did it matter to anyone but her?
Later, when her feelings were nearly over—
sending waves to white cliffs, to —
she didn’t want more suffer-ring.
Silence in a place of earth
Where she daren’t hope blooms
would grow again.
But they did, as they always do—
they did when the games and the gamers—
and the cheering jeering audience—were gone trope.
And she deemed her dress had been okay,
that loving-kindness would’ve respected her
anyway, and had—
regardless of whatever her poem had been wearing or
not wearing, that any sinner deemed bad.
Should she cover? Cover oceans in a black shroud
Should she be dark ghost in a land where skin is loud
Should she never walk on land—
Should she never swim near-nude in nature
nor “get out of hand”—
should she? *When they can?* I ask you,
gods almighty, if it were their
sister, their wife, their mother, their daughter,
would they think so? Would he? Would she?
If so, I feel a great sorrow,
sorrow
sorrow swelling up
in me. It
*tears*—
tears through her—
the truth is,
the truth is
.
.
.
.
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*draft from 2021-01-07. Related poem: The truth is (WP link: here).
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Lia,
You have changed my way of seeing. I will humbly leave future flowers to flutter with their own petals.
Yours,
David
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David, this is such a kind and generous response… and the best compliment you could have given here. My humblest gratitude and respect to you. We all have different ways of seeing and I know mine is considered by most to be a tad on the sensitive side… ;)) Also this isn’t just about that poem but about a lot of stuff in the world that I’ve been mulling over. But you also help change, or rather confirmed my re-changing way of seeing, also. I truly appreciate it. Sincerely
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Your words stirred something deep within me, Lia. Such gentle, soul stirring words. Stay blessed, my dear.
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So sorry I missed this before, Punam. Thank you, truly. I appreciate it so much. 💗
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No worries. My pleasure. 😊
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POWERFUL Verse!! Your words are bang on, Lia, I wish people will try and understand this.
Loved it, absolutely. 💕💕🙏✨
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Thank you dear A, for your wonderful support. Means a lot to me. 💗🌷🙏🥰
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